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In the streets
I'm left there to wonder
to think of the many possibilities
that the shadows give
Not knowing where these cold pavements guide me
I just know I am going
that everything will be okay
my choices will be good
even though they may bring tears and fears
I'll never regret
In the streets
Where I'm left to wonder
Forever thinking of the possibilities

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Comment by scribbler on August 16, 2010 at 11:52pm
I like it, I like it! Doing some soul searching are you, Viviana? :)
Comment by Kay Elizabeth on August 17, 2010 at 4:43am
I like it too even though the general air of your poem feels very sombre and serious. Good job, Viviana. :)
Comment by Viviana Arteaga on August 18, 2010 at 1:13pm
Thanks guys!!
In a way Scrib I was! Still am!
Comment by Oliver Black on November 19, 2010 at 6:26am
You have such beautiful poems, and I think this is my favorite. The shadows acting as ideas, hidden ideas, waiting to be discovered in a cold, concrete world that is more than what it seems. This is very real and true, and I can't wait to see what other fantastic works you have in store.
Comment by Viviana Arteaga on November 20, 2010 at 9:38pm
Thank you Oliver!! So sweet!


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