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Imagine life after suicide,
Living on the other side,
Where hell and heaven collide,
Where will my soul reside,
Where do they all abide,
They talk about a paradise,
They say that it's very nice,
Whenever they fantasize,
Jesus makes my soul to rise,
But if I back slide,
And commit the suicide,
I wont meet the heavens bride,
Is there life after suicide?

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Comment by scribbler on November 21, 2009 at 6:55am
That's a big question you ask there, Michael. I wish I had answers. :) I like the rhythm of your poem. Do you always write poetry in rhyme or do you vary your style?
Comment by Robert Edward Littlefield on December 29, 2009 at 1:47am
Suicide is most definitely a mental sickness and a desperation for relief from the emotional pain. Do you really believe God holds the mentally ill to bear for their actions, when they don't even live in reality?

I think not, but then, this is only my opinion.



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