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Etched in my mind
Time 11:05,never thought I'd cry
Why must it end, all we'v been through
Bus will arrive soon,
Life will die a little soon
Time slows, every second watched go
No!!you must not leave me, we were free Enjoyed being able to see
Warmth We be, dissipates at a rapid rate
Looking straight, I see your back to me
Last glimps of freedom, tear filled with US Touches every inch,like a million punches
Where is this dam bus
Nicepoem. A little different but I enoyed reading it.
Thx, yeah im experimenting with a couple different styles. Thx for your input, will have more because I write a lot, only post a few per day though.
This is a very emotional write. I can feel that pain that one feels when someone you love walks away. It is a good write. Thanks for sharing this with us.
I can hear the pain. I know this was hard to write, even if it came easy. Third line perhaps put in (after) all we been through. And the seventh sentence down, I would take out (me). Again, very heartfelt piece...
@robert, Thanks again, yes this was very hard to write, and still remember that day vividly. Strange how it seemed so slow,with everything else faded out except us. Thanks for the advice, think I will change it. Hopefully I will be publishing my first book soon, so everybody look out,need as much support as possible. Thanks!