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Once had seen beautiful hope, she illuminated my road
Forced me to me,opened my eyes to see what i could achieve
Together the world,was imploded into a diamond in crested pearl
Worlds collided into a supernova, reshaping fertile hope
Glowing fire flies, is what I see in her glimmering eyes
Applied rose peddle soft touch,enabling a gold rush to the heart
Dopamine recharged, serotonin left scars
Venus and mars dont seem so far to travel
If only to admire her aura one more time
One minunte = a lifetime without her

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I like this, especially since you used neurotransmitters in your poem!!


Thanks much, Dont really like the last line. Thought it would sound better, idk might change it. But thanks for commenting!


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