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My name is Jamie and I am new to the site. I am a poet and writer. If you'd be so kind as to go view my work and let me know what you think that would be awesome! Please and thank you! 

 

You can also follow me here if you wish to: http://www.facebook.com/pages/JB-Sullivan-Writer-Poet/122864171138886

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I'm not a poet, but I'd be happy to glance through a sample of your other writing, however, I can't seem to find it.
It's on my blog. The Ebon Rose and The Raven's Fled. Thank you! :D
Do you have a link? I can't find it.

Just read it and it's fantasic!! Love it!! Both me and Anna are working on a sci-fi project that I started.  It would be good to have you on board mate.   I'm away from home at the moment so it hard for me to get to a computer until next week.

 


Anna here is his link:  http://authspot.com/short-stories/the-venom-of-enigma/

 

Enjoy!

Thanks Toby, I found it.

Nice scene, needs a nip and tuck though. How could he understand the age of a sprite? Though her laugh might startle him, I can't equate it to a thunderclap. There are other such little things too. Very nice scene though so don't take my criticism to hard.

No, no! You're criticism is brilliant. It is what moulds a writer into a bard. Thank you! Toby, I would love to take a look at what Anna and yourself are cooking up. Thank you.  :)
Hey JB.  I enjoyed reading your short story.  I found the sprite delightful.  :)
BJ - send me a document of that story and I'll give you a fuller critique. Maybe some of my comments will help. AnnaLWalls@gmail.com
Will do. Thank you. :)

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