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My name is Jamie and I am new to the site. I am a poet and writer. If you'd be so kind as to go view my work and let me know what you think that would be awesome! Please and thank you!
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Just read it and it's fantasic!! Love it!! Both me and Anna are working on a sci-fi project that I started. It would be good to have you on board mate. I'm away from home at the moment so it hard for me to get to a computer until next week.
Anna here is his link: http://authspot.com/short-stories/the-venom-of-enigma/
Thanks Toby, I found it.
Nice scene, needs a nip and tuck though. How could he understand the age of a sprite? Though her laugh might startle him, I can't equate it to a thunderclap. There are other such little things too. Very nice scene though so don't take my criticism to hard.