Comments - Toxic Dreams - Authors.com2024-03-28T21:41:41Zhttp://www.authors.com/profiles/comment/feed?attachedTo=3798404%3ABlogPost%3A4615&xn_auth=noThank you for the help. Im no…tag:www.authors.com,2010-01-20:3798404:Comment:46472010-01-20T21:14:20.000ZDiana Davishttp://www.authors.com/profile/DianaBrianneDavis
Thank you for the help. Im not showing off because i have nothing to show off, i just wanted some help. Again, thank you, Scribbler.
Thank you for the help. Im not showing off because i have nothing to show off, i just wanted some help. Again, thank you, Scribbler. Diana, here's a bit of advice…tag:www.authors.com,2010-01-20:3798404:Comment:46262010-01-20T13:39:48.000Zscribblerhttp://www.authors.com/profile/scribbler
Diana, here's a bit of advice. It's very very hard to read a wall of text. People don't like to do that because it's hard to follow and tough on the eyes. I read two paragraphs then stopped when I saw that giant block of text that came next. I'd suggest you should reorganize your piece into paragraphs and you may get more reading it to the end. Do you want some help with it or just to show it off? It's good if you let us know. :)
Diana, here's a bit of advice. It's very very hard to read a wall of text. People don't like to do that because it's hard to follow and tough on the eyes. I read two paragraphs then stopped when I saw that giant block of text that came next. I'd suggest you should reorganize your piece into paragraphs and you may get more reading it to the end. Do you want some help with it or just to show it off? It's good if you let us know. :)