Comments - These Prison Bars - Authors.com2024-03-29T01:08:04Zhttp://www.authors.com/profiles/comment/feed?attachedTo=3798404%3ABlogPost%3A116554&xn_auth=noOk, now this is good! The end…tag:www.authors.com,2011-12-29:3798404:Comment:1164082011-12-29T06:26:10.802ZJonathon Koernerhttp://www.authors.com/profile/JonathonKoerner
Ok, now this is good! The end is what kills it, "these prison bars saved my life." Also I like how u painted the picture"these prison bars have become me...wind blowing in my hair" <<great
Ok, now this is good! The end is what kills it, "these prison bars saved my life." Also I like how u painted the picture"these prison bars have become me...wind blowing in my hair" <<great