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These prison bars...were not meant for me

not meant for this little girl

I look outside them

in shame and guilt ridden

these prison bars have become me, 

engulfed me and deadend me.

Oh, how I long for freedom,

for fresh air

to feel the wind blowing

in my hair

these prison bars.... they

have taken over happiness my hope

my pride and my dreams.

These prison bars

\have also taught me slow down, 

to be patient,

to be understanding and able and willing.

These prison bars saved my life.

Hilary Wreidt Thompson

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Comment by Jonathon Koerner on December 29, 2011 at 7:26am
Ok, now this is good! The end is what kills it, "these prison bars saved my life." Also I like how u painted the picture"these prison bars have become me...wind blowing in my hair" great


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