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The car sped past
The glittering neon signs
Flickering lights
Of an evil city.

The walking wounded
Crowded busy streets
Empty eyes
Empty laughter.

Running from random bullets
They scattered fast
Buying bangles
Buying shoes.

Today is here
Tomorrow might never be
So hurry on
Roll up the glass.

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Comment by Viviana Arteaga on August 7, 2010 at 11:21pm
That's really good I liked it!!
Comment by Kay Elizabeth on August 10, 2010 at 7:45am
I was with you until the roll up the glass line right at the end. What were you conveying there? You need to excuse me asking. I'm not very well this week.
Comment by scribbler on August 19, 2010 at 8:25am
Kay, I may be way off here: roll up the glass I assumed referred to a car window. Very clever actually. Nice job, Sabena. I hope you share more with us. :)
Comment by Sabena Siddiqui on August 23, 2010 at 6:16pm
Yes ,it is a car speeding through a troubled city,trying to escape.


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