"Good poem. However, in the first line, did you mean "mystic?" Don't know if you made a mistake or meant to write "mistic." Also, line 13, "HIDS" or "HIDES." …"
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QUEENHE WAS MISTIC IN ALL HIS WAYSSUAVE AS HE COULD BE .EDUCATED TO A LEVELVOCABULARY REFINE AND SWEET.CHRISMATIC IN HIS WALKAS THOUGH HE OWNS THE WORLD.NOT ONE HAIR OUT OF PLACEHE ATTRACTS ALL THE GIRLS.UNABLE TO CATCH THE QUEEN OF HIS HEART.HE WALKS WITH HIS HEAD UP HIGHAND ALL THE WOMAN CALL HIM ARROGANTNEVER NOTICING THE TEAR IN HIS EYE.HE HIDS BEHIND HIS DISPOSITIONHOPING NO ONE EVER HEARTHAT ALL HE WANTS IS HER LOVEAND THATS HIS BIGGEST FEAR.SHE CROSSES HIS MIND LIKE A PICTUREAND LEAVES…See More
Venus Hornsby left a comment for Venus Hornsby"Hello everyone! Sorry I haven't been around for a while have been dealing with life crisis that make for good material. Thanks for all your comments and I look forward to getting to know everyone and receiving some pointers from those who…"
Kay left a comment for Venus Hornsby"Hi Venus! Great to have you around. We’d like to see your writing sometime if you’re happy to share it here. Welcome and enjoy yourself! :) We’d love it if you could drop by this thread and please tell us how you found…"
scribbler left a comment for Venus Hornsby"Nice to meet you Venus. :) Welcome aboard. I’ll look forward to getting to know you better."
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- At 4:51am on June 28, 2011, scribbler said…
- Nice to meet you Venus. :) Welcome aboard. I’ll look forward to getting to know you better.
- At 8:56am on July 13, 2011, Kay said…
- Hi Venus! Great to have you around. We’d like to see your writing sometime if you’re happy to share it here. Welcome and enjoy yourself! :) We’d love it if you could drop by this thread and please tell us how you found your way to Authors.com. :)
- At 3:34pm on January 24, 2012, Venus Hornsby said…
Hello everyone! Sorry I haven't been around for a while have been dealing with life crisis that make for good material. Thanks for all your comments and I look forward to getting to know everyone and receiving some pointers from those who are already on their way to putting out hard work that you are proud to share. : )
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