"Pritha~ What a sweet love poem that reminds us how fleeting love can be and how we must cherish it while we have it. I especially like the lines, "The morning sun dazzling on the dew" and "A little bird's love was colored…"
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With - waiting for your comments :)
Started this discussion. Last reply by Callie Leah Jul 28, 2011. 2 Replies 1 Like
WithI wantWith a little cloud in my skyA drop of rainA handful of mudThe earth damp, yet dry.I wantWith a drop of…Continue
One of my recent poems: Comments Needed :)
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Vulnerable Only For YouA knock at my door, rattling windowsWindow panes wet with the rainIs it you, my…Continue
How do I get published?
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I have been writing since the time I learnt to construct sentences...I have several newspaper publications, but now, I want to publish a book. Any ideas, how?
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"Nice poem. Seems like you are mourning a lost love. I enjoyed reading it. Some history pulls one back; it's like an endless struggle (perhaps it's designed that way because someone wishes us to be lost forever). I…"
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A Song Unheard...Red as blood, the shrub with roses twoButterflies around, a yellow and a blueA soft breeze flirting with the branch aboveShh, they said...'tis the day of love...Flying around, sparrows, swallows all in pairsLook around, feel the love in the airThe Nightingale fluttered out of her nestSing the song of love, sing your best!The morning sun dazzling on the dewA february chill, a crimson hueThe Nightingale…See More
Pritha Chattopadhyay replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"Thank you so much Jonathon!
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Jonathon Koerner replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"Wow, really like this, last part defiantly hits home strong. I think poems that are emotional and people can relate to are some of the best. Look forward to reading more."
Pritha Chattopadhyay replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"Thank u lots :)
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Michael C Bliss replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"love the metaphor of time from the point of view of drowning inside the hourglass. The second stanza was very powerful to me...the balance of expectations vs. Reality and the price we pay in between. Thank you for a glimpse."
Robert L. Allen replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"
There is so much power in that sentence (I stand a lonely self, a tired me...myself with me.) A tired me empacks the sentence so deeply...I wonder if you said I stand, a lonely self, a tired me...myself , me. (And perhaps…"
Pritha Chattopadhyay replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"Thanks a lot Robert :)
Yeah true, "Love is gone" adds more power...will change that part :)
The next one...well, I had actually wanted to stress my loneliness when I said 'Myslef with me'...it was sort of intended to show…"
Robert L. Allen replied to Pritha Chattopadhyay's discussion 'Comments needed :)' in the group Poetry"Great poem. I would suggest to read it out loud, the flow is up and down. A lot of feeling...Last segment, third line, I would write out the words, Your love is gone, gives it more power. Next sentence down I would take out (with me). Again great…"
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- Writer
- Favorite Literature Type
- Poetry
- Favorite Genre or Category
- Philosophy
- Favorite Book
- God Of Small Things, Pride And Prejudice, To Sir With Love
- Favorite Author
- Jane Austen, Arundhati Roy
Comment Wall (3 comments)
- At 12:31am on July 23, 2011,
scribbler said… - Nice to meet you Pritha. :) Welcome aboard. I’ll look forward to getting to know you better.
- At 3:46am on July 26, 2011, Robert L. Allen said…
- Welcome...Have fun...
- At 8:24am on August 14, 2011,
Kay said… - A warm welcome to you Pritha. Authors.com is a great place to be. Enjoy yourself! :) Would you be so kind as to drop by this thread please and tell us how you found your way to Authors.com? :)
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