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"Lovely poem. Short but to the point. The lines flow into each other. I liked the last two lines, especially."
Robert L. Allen replied to Justin Randolph's discussion 'A Brighter Day!' in the group Poetry"Very nice poem but the rhyme changes from every sentence to every other halfway through. I would keep the rhythm going one way or the other. The poem hold sadness and hope. I would take out the first word maybe to make it even stronger...And also…"
Jonathon Koerner replied to Justin Randolph's discussion 'A Brighter Day!' in the group Poetry"Lol this my little brother, styles are similar but still different.
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Mariah de la Croix left a comment for Justin Randolph"Good to meet you, Justin. I absolutely LOVE that poem of yours', btw. 'A Brighter Day' - marvelous!"
Hilary Wreidt Thompson replied to Justin Randolph's discussion 'A Brighter Day!' in the group Poetry"This is really an enjoyable to read and re-read."
Mariah de la Croix replied to Justin Randolph's discussion 'A Brighter Day!' in the group Poetry"Justin... I'm not one who is very much into poetry, but when I read something particularly moving and heartfelt, I love it. Your poem says SO much. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing this lovely gift with us.
Mariah"
Justin Randolph added a discussion to the group Poetry
A Brighter Day!
Maybe in the mourning i'll be able to smile.Upon nights returning I may be happy awhile.If today is filled with sorrow,perhaps joy will come tomorrow.Look for the light, try to find a way,know through the darkest nightalways comes a brighter day!See More
"I like your poem, somewhat. I'm a little confused though. If your soul is old and cold how, then, can it still be growing? I think it would wither and die."
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- Poet
- Favorite Literature Type
- Non-Fiction
- Favorite Genre or Category
- Horror
- Favorite Author
- dean koontz
Comment Wall (3 comments)
- At 9:57pm on May 16, 2011,
scribbler said… - Nice to meet you Justin. :) Welcome aboard. I’ll look forward to getting to know you and your poetry better.
- At 7:51am on May 21, 2011,
Kay said… - Hi Justin! Great to have you here and a warm welcome to Authors.com. :) It’s a very friendly community. If you wouldn't mind we’d love it if you could drop by this thread and share how you found us. We have a Poetry Group section too.
- At 4:41pm on December 24, 2011, Mariah de la Croix said…
Good to meet you, Justin. I absolutely LOVE that poem of yours', btw. 'A Brighter Day' - marvelous!
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