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Started this discussion. Last reply by scribbler Mar 14, 2010. 5 Replies 0 Likes

I was a little stuck on the other story I was writing and this one just sort of came to life, so I thought I'd ask for some help. Alex: It started off so well though. I don’t know what…Continue

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More Help!

Started this discussion. Last reply by pragati parikh Feb 25, 2010. 9 Replies 0 Likes

Since hardly anyone read my other copy, I'll post it again but it has a bit more added to it, so if anyone reads this, please help me!“Jen, I really don’t want you going out tonight,” my mom informed…Continue

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Constuctive Critism Please!

Started this discussion. Last reply by Callie Leah Dec 16, 2009. 1 Reply 0 Likes

Here's the first part to my story. It's not the whole first chapter, I just thought I'd put it up anyway. So please help.“Jen, I really don’t want you going out tonight,” my mom informed me once…Continue

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Can anyone help me with my 'book'?

Started this discussion. Last reply by Kay Nov 13, 2009. 4 Replies 0 Likes

I'm starting a book, and I'm not sure I'm going to publish it, I just want it to be able to publish. What I'm trying to say is that have the first chapter of something I started and I need help with…Continue

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Lisa R.Brereton left a comment for Julie Ann Burgos

Hi Julie Ann, Welcome, it is so nice to have you here, and would like to know more about what you write, and have you published? I am an Author of self-help guide books and poet, I have a website if you would like to learn more about me and my…

Apr 7, 2011

Julie Ann Burgos and David Brandon Lee are now friends Mar 18, 2010

scribbler replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'Help'

You're very welcome Julie! I'm glad it was helpful to you. It would be great if you could share the revised version further on down the line. It helps to see a "before" and "after". You'll see your own progress…

Mar 14, 2010

Julie Ann Burgos replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'Help'

thanks! I did really feel I was putting too much info. :) Thanks again.

Mar 10, 2010

scribbler replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'Help'

Nice story, Julie! I would have suggested you shorten some sentences and do more showing rather than telling. It's also okay to leave some things to the reader's imagination. You don't need to share every little detail all at…

Mar 9, 2010

Julie Ann Burgos replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'Help'

Thanks for the help on those detaily parts :) Those were actually bugging me, and I though I was carrying on a bit much. haha. So, really, thank you. And I'm glad you liked it. It's my favorite one that I'm writing so far. And the…

Mar 5, 2010

Callie Leah replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'Help'

That was incredible. I love the story. But I have one suggestion. You kind of droned on with details. Instead of saying: The only thing she is truly jealous of over me is my eyes. She has deep, brown eyes, but my eyes are a sky blue color. But…

Mar 4, 2010

Help!

I was a little stuck on the other story I was writing and this one just sort of came to life, so I thought I'd ask for some help. Alex: It started off so well though. I don’t know what happened. Taylor: Yeah, I know. It’s tough, isn’t it? . I could just see him crying his eyes out; sobbing over his IPhone, trying to see what he was texting to me. I felt so sorry for him. Alex is my best friend. Well, one of them anyway. The other, Rachel, is his…See More

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pragati parikh replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

this is really very good and im quite exited to know what is going to happen next do write and let me know the end

Feb 25, 2010

michael r. oconnor replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

I liked what you have done here. It tells a story through a teenage girls eyes and comes across as such. I was a bit surprised at the sudden turn of events, and possibly believe you could lead up to that point a little more. For example dive into…

Feb 24, 2010

Cassandra Linson and Julie Ann Burgos are now friends Jan 25, 2010

scribbler replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

I forgot to split it into two until it was too late for me to edit it LOL. I should take my own advice! :) Okay, here's how I should have done it first time around.

Jan 6, 2010

scribbler replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

Here's some help for this paragraph. :) Fix the typo I highlighted with bold. Shorten the sentences. The middle one about the ruffles is clumsy and makes the dress description too long. You can share the same information and break it up. When…

Jan 6, 2010

Julie Ann Burgos replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

any kind of help i can get. lolz

Jan 6, 2010

Julie Ann Burgos replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

Actually I want any kind of help I can get.

Jan 6, 2010

Kay replied to Julie Ann Burgos's discussion 'More Help!'

Julie, it's not that people don't want to read it. I wouldn't want you to be thinking that because we're a friendly community. We all have demands on our time and long extracts aren't always the best way to get feedback…

Jan 5, 2010

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At 2:16am on October 31, 2009, scribbler said…: Nice to meet you Julie. Welcome to Authors.com. :) Or should I call you Julie Ann? I hope you enjoy being amongst us and I'll look forward to hearing more about your writing.

At 1:35am on November 3, 2009, Kay said…: Hi! Welcome to Authors.com Julie Ann. It's great to meet you. Enjoy yourself! :)

At 4:18pm on November 09, 2009, Julie Ann Burgos added a gift to their profile…: Pink Ribbon
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At 6:26pm on November 24, 2009, The Outlaw said…: Hello,

My name is The Outlaw co-host of The Writer's Block on www.svmixradio.com. We are interested in an interview with you about your book. The show airs live at 8pm to 9pm est and the show is all about the writing genre. We interview authors and poets, illustrator and editors, anyone in the writing genre.

Please let me know if you are interested, and your availability for Wednesdays between 8pm and 9pm est. The interview is conducted via phone, please send the contact number and we will call when it is time for the interview, usually about 8:10 - 8:15 and it lasts 20 - 25 minutes talking about the book and the author and any other projects the author may have.

You can reach me by email at theoutlaw@svmixradio.com and I will get you scheduled.

Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you.

At 7:12pm on December 4, 2009, Kay said…: Are you struggling with a topic or a character or what, Julie? Fresh air will clear your mind and invigorate you. :)

At 11:43pm on December 17, 2009, Callie Leah said…: Hey Julie! I posted what I've written of my new book in a new discussion called feedback. I'm looking forward to seeing what you think about it!

At 5:10pm on April 7, 2011, Lisa R.Brereton said…: Hi Julie Ann,

Welcome, it is so nice to have you here, and would like to know more about what you write, and have you published? I am an Author of self-help guide books and poet, I have a website if you would like to learn more about me and my books, it is: www.wix.com/LisaBrereton/itswheretheheartis, then just click on my blog.

it would be so nice to hear from you

Lisa Brereton