"Good poem. Liked the beginning--nice flow. Thought the 4th line of the 2nd stanza a bit too long, though. Loved the 4th stanza--the struggle, even though difficult, was worth the view. Nice poem."
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Jonathon Koerner
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SPAM
Started Jan 24, 2012 0 Replies 0 Likes
Think cristina simon is spam, seeing she sent the exact same message to a bunch of people. Who ever's in charge of…Continue
Good Vs Evil
Started Jan 22, 2012 0 Replies 0 Likes
Sunshine of colorful rays of hope Darkness worthy of abyssLoving hand leant to friendsStabs in the back Never quiting or accepting failureMislead lies filled with empty cries Loyalty, family and true…Continue
Universe will explode
Started Dec 28, 2011 0 Replies 1 Like
I now understand, I always controlled my destiny;neglected myself purposefully, seems strange;but this is all i know,pain,death, and betrayal ;I subconsciously believed that love would never find…Continue
Window into the soul
Started Dec 27, 2011 0 Replies 1 Like
Have you ever looked in her eyes Most guys,avoid before seeing Look closely to see her true soul Be warned, may be freezing cold Small chance although, that there will be a warming flow Antidote…Continue
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Jonathon Koerner added a discussion to the group Poetry
The Mountian and My Friends
The MountainWe three sitobserving the same rock,soil, and treesBut we perceive differently I see a challenge, with hillsides and bottomless lakeswith songs, and dances, midnight romances Growth in comprehending the mountain is the most powerful teacherThese were my good friends indeedBut they just couldn’t consciously seeIt had too many obstacles, to many rocks And stood fiercely intimidating my friends Well, eventually I dragged my friends to the topProving the view was quite a masterpieceAt…See More
Jonathon Koerner added a discussion to the group PoetryGood will conquer evil
I've got to give it to the man wearing the red hoodWith horns of deceit and lies poking about His fist stung as they struck the skinHowever a heart pumped with loveAnd lined with peaceIs golden armor to a silver bullet As a whole we are sturdy as a mountainWhile one may sway in the windStorms will inevitable blow inward Embrace truth and let it guide us to the lightAs if stars of hope burned a h*** in evils darknessIlluminating the sky in the shadows of evils reflection Flowers bloom…See More
Hilary Wreidt Thompson replied to Jonathon Koerner's discussion 'Self Induced Pain' in the group Poetry"Hi Jonathan! I love this poem..so many of us suffer from "the", self induced pain. How are you, my friend? email me"
Jonathon Koerner replied to Jonathon Koerner's discussion 'Think bigger...no BIGGER' in the group Poetry"Hey, thanks much for reading and commenting!! I haven't been on here much lately, due to work. But yeah I agree, think this should be revised and written more fluently and poetic. Removing the unnecessary words/lines. This was also written…"
"Jonathon, I like this poem about "Think Bigger." Beginning line is a grabber: "Surrounded by vultures, death resonantes ..." (Think you mispell words on purpose, for a reason.) Giggled reading about the judges…"
Jonathon Koerner added a discussion to the group PoetryThink bigger...no BIGGER
Surrounded by vultures, death resinates; evil impersonates within imprisoned inmatesMind control like mk ultra;oh the devil bought yaA brand new car, two faced wife, and the knife used to slice your own wristYour smile hides the lies, cries n dirty trials and tribulations; insane if you remain expecting gods mercyThirsty people will steal your drink,(wink wink) ... sip away until bone dryNow dehydrated everybody's gone and defiantly not sharing a dropTo top it off, they sit in there loft…See More
Jonathon Koerner added a discussion to the group PoetryAll that is
Freedom seems so idealBut seeing all is not exactly called funPeering through your attempts at conceded self confidenceWhen the world does not halt at your command, you look confusedSeeing through evil to hope for lightWhen most quit, I have yet to beginLimiting us to our self knowledge, people accept there stupidityNot wanting the real truth, because your fiction reality fits betterTruth is you are not incognito, I still see your empathy inlined pityYou remember all the lies and sins, I can…See More
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- the rose that crew from concrete
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- Saul Williams
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2pac- Redempton song(with poem by:Jon)
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Ben E King-Stand By Me(with poem "Shared Happiness")
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Set fires with my tears
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Check out first videos I did. Still improving, these were more of a rough draft
Posted on December 23, 2011 at 1:19pm 0 Comments 0 Likes
Hello everybody @authors.com. I am a fairly new author, obviously I have written throughout my life. But only recently I have focused on getting better and trying more. I like all styles writing but …
Posted on December 21, 2011 at 1:18am 0 Comments 0 Likes
Hello everybody @authors.com. I am a fairly new author, obviously I have written throughout my life. But only recently I have focused on getting better and trying more. I like all styles writing but mostly write poetry. Any help or criticism is welcomed, as I would like to better my writing in any way. So for now I'm going to post a few poems out of my 100 poems in two weeks journal. Lol wasn't trying to do this, just had a lot of things going on at the time. So I wrote a lot those two weeks,… Continue
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- At 12:18am on December 21, 2011,
Chuck Keyes (The Chuck!) said… Jonathon, welcome aboard authors.com …from The Chuck!
I write sci-fi novels filled with adventure, mystery, romance, drama, horror, and many more genres all mixed in... Sci-fi for everyone to enjoy. I'm also a published poet. When you have a moment, please check out my Authors page and a few of my videos and blogs I've recently added. Many of my blogs consist of free to read enjoyable sci-fi stories I plan to unite within a book. My newest sci-fi novel is 'They!', which is related to the 1954 sci-fi classic movie, 'Them!'.Let me know if you'd like to become friends.
The Chuck!
- At 12:34pm on December 23, 2011,
Kay Elizabeth said… Welcome to Authors.com Jonathon! Lovely to meet you. It’s great to have you here. We’d love it if you could drop by this thread please and tell us all about how you found your way to Authors.com. :)
- At 10:18pm on December 25, 2011,
scribbler said… Nice to meet you Jonathon. You’ve come to a good place to meet other poets. :) Welcome aboard. I’ll look forward to learning more about you.
- At 11:59pm on December 25, 2011,
Betty Damil said… Welcome to our world dude! lol Its a writers realm Enjoy it here! the names Betty by the way ;)
- At 2:09am on December 27, 2011, Betty Damil said…
haha thanks man i hope your holidays were fantastic as well! enjoy authors. com . Ive been an active member for about 2 years now i think? idk lol ive been here less this year cuz im in my last year of high school. so im been trampled by erudite madness. it would be a joy to get to know you! haha in all Im a goth senior in high school writing my own book series. lol and you? i see your a poet. thats great. ;)
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