"Beautiful and so true. Everyone is a someone, but as you so eloquently say, most have a habit of putting others before themselves. But sometimes what we need is to realise just how unique and fabulous we are, is to put ourselves first. Allow our own…"
I wrote this, to relate to me more than anything I see myself as the special somebody. One who will put everyone before herself and it's inspired by Emily Dickinson's poem "Are you a Nobody". Comments, advice are always appreciated. Thank you.~Carly Jean Montgomery-Wildermuth.Emily once asked “Are you a Nobody?”Emily, I say to youI am a somebody, a special somebody.There are a lot of special somebody’s.They’re different you see and want to be seen as special and different.Painters want to be…See More
"There is power in poetry like this. The question, the answer: which one do we fear to hear. And how might we feel knowing a little of the story at a time. It is that unwinding and knowing that compels us to read on. Well done. If ever you can…"
My sister's and I's relationship is not normal or perfect this sums up the last 16 years of my life and my 3 sister's involvement.SissyI love you sissy, you’re so tall, and your belly so chubby.Why is it so chubby? Is that a baby? He’s so cute.Why don’t you love me sissy? I never see you.Sissy you’re belly it’s big again! She’s so cute?Sissy why does she play in the dirt?I love her sissy she reminds me of you!Sissy why isn’t your baby boy moving? Why isn’t he breathing?Sissy? Where did you go?…See More
"Second stanza, fourth and sixth sentences stops the flow, might think a rewrite.
Third stanza, third sentence, very powerful!
The ending leaves more to come. Powerful piece with a lot of emotion.
Just a thought; forth…"
Those who wear the masksShe hides in the back trying to changePraying for a chance for someone to careA stranger to say she holds beauty other than the friends all dayBut she is not one of themThose who go around with no hips, no thighs, and no idea how hard life can beA chance to prove her loyalty He hides with his friends knowing there trustHe loves himself the way he isWaiting some boy to love him for who he is and what he holdsKnowing the way he presents himself should make him no…See More
Note: Readers this poem is about societies view and my view on the term perfection. But none the less this is my view/oppinion on the subject of perfection, read, comment advice and if you have any ideas for poems OR would like me to write a personal poem for you please message me. Thank you :) Perfection:Such an ugly term, perfectionDoes it truly exist?And if it is amongst this worldDefine it for me and societyHow do you change society?For them to change their view on perfectionIt is not a…See More
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