"Some of the dialog is very awkward, and you need to look into proper police procedure and questioning. The part about your killer could use some polishing too, and while you might be trying to go for the lack of feeling, the dry description kind of…"
"This string is over a year old, but that's okay. Of course Outskirts Press gave you a good book, but it will be a long time before you break even on sales. Any publisher you pay to publish your book isn't interested in your book, they are…"
"One good way is to Google book bloggers and search out those who might be interested in your genre. Most of the time they'll not only put up a blog post, they'll also post on Amazon and on Goodreads."
Yes, I'm a self-published author. To satisfy both of you. I post many samples of my writing from most any of my different books (I've published only one) on my blog - http://AnnaLWalls.blogspot.com - though the latest post isn't one of those. I have about half of my books' synopsizes up on my website - http://AnnaLWalls.weebly.com - Feel free to stop by both places. I've made my website as comment-easy as possible and would love to read what you have to say. Any suggestions are most welcome.
hi Anna, did some research and found that the spelling of the name of Gandalf used in rohan was spelled Mithrandir my city is spelled Mithradier again I thank you very much for all of your imput, this book is my first attempt and I wish I had known some people that write when I started it. if you dont mind I would like to ask for advice now and then as I am about to start a second .
Hi Anna! My name is Garry E. Lewis, I just signed on with authors.com I write fictional stories. I have a sci-fi fantasy entitled The Curse of The Devil's Wolf Strap published thru Lulu.com And A mystery novel entitled The Rileyville Mystery thru PA. I seen where you loved fiction as well just wanted to say hi!