"Pretty gripping, but you're right; you do have a few issues in there. At first you need to separate where you are from describing the room. It sounds like the walls are in your bed. Another small point - you say it was the first and last time…"
"Yeah, never gave the lack much thought until I published my first book through AuthorHouse. They were the only people I could reach by phone. Mailing letters, because of where I am, can take months to see some kind of reply from an inquiry. I did…"
"This is one guy I found. He has a nice rich voice. http://narrationbygeorge.com/ Seems to be very reasonable with his pricing too. I also found a lady on Facebook who may read my one book that's primarily female POV
"I do both because it's always to cater to as wide an audience as possible. Plus, I can't sell eBooks from my home. In the near future, I also plan to go with audio books both electronic download and disk, and for the same reason."
"Half way through the prologue, I can already see that you need help. I see serious run-on sentences and wordy descriptions. Keep practicing though. Practice makes perfect. Sorry I just don't have time to read more just now."
Yes, I'm a self-published author. To satisfy both of you. I post many samples of my writing from most any of my different books (I've published only one) on my blog - http://AnnaLWalls.blogspot.com - though the latest post isn't one of those. I have about half of my books' synopsizes up on my website - http://AnnaLWalls.weebly.com - Feel free to stop by both places. I've made my website as comment-easy as possible and would love to read what you have to say. Any suggestions are most welcome.
hi Anna, did some research and found that the spelling of the name of Gandalf used in rohan was spelled Mithrandir my city is spelled Mithradier again I thank you very much for all of your imput, this book is my first attempt and I wish I had known some people that write when I started it. if you dont mind I would like to ask for advice now and then as I am about to start a second .
Hi Anna! My name is Garry E. Lewis, I just signed on with authors.com I write fictional stories. I have a sci-fi fantasy entitled The Curse of The Devil's Wolf Strap published thru Lulu.com And A mystery novel entitled The Rileyville Mystery thru PA. I seen where you loved fiction as well just wanted to say hi!