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"Individual"

Eclipse by day, Eclipse by night
In nature grow refining delight
Fascinating ornaments of eternal time
Bountiful myopia celestial substance
Mesmerizing conceptions independently dance
Prosperous banquet of sub-structural intentions
Eclipse of earth, eclipse of moon
Characteristic of human race, it is a unique, specified tune
Each one's personality sets apart
Individuality of one's mind and heart

by Tabitha Robin Pike
"The Burning Bush"

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Intriguing, I don't think I have written to much specifically on individualism. Might try at some point,like the idea.

It is something we all have. We are all different in so many ways, but so alike in others.  glad you enjoyed this one as well.

Jonathon Koerner said:

Intriguing, I don't think I have written to much specifically on individualism. Might try at some point,like the idea.

Another good poem though a little difficult for me to understand. Line 8 might be rewritten--something like this:

 

Characteristic of human race,

A unique, specified tune.

 

Don't have to take my word for it.

I like your poem, how it intertwines with human involvement, and the disgraces(health problems) that the human(s) may come in contact with.

kel

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