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I was about ready to go crazy when I wrote this poem, I have so many pent up feelings, like usual, only tonight was much worse. anyway, thank goodness for poetry, and it's calming affect. This one's a little biting, but I needed to vent, so, like it or not, here's my latest poem.
My fate never mattered
I’ll deal with that later
Selfish is what I don’t wish to be
Evil is the soul inside me
Perfecttion is what I must strive
If I wish to survive
In my own head
I’d rather be dead
But that would be selfish
I do what they ask
What is my next task?
I’ll be a good girl
Just don’t twirl
My life out of control
I’m a troll
Seaking to be angelic
With those eyes as my chritique
Maybe I’m selfish for my none existant suicide
I guess it’s time to decide
Live as the devil
The devil in your eyes
Or die an angel
And swallow your lies.
That is amazing and extremly beautiful!Amazing job!!!
Thanks Carly, Robert. I make a lot of my poems none rhyming, the words just seemed to flow with my emotion at the time, which is why I rhymed it, but I'll take your suggestion, and see if I can make it into a none rhyming. Thanks for the input
I have always used rythme in my work and all of my books, simply to allow the reader to be able to concentrate on the content and engage with it.
I like this piece a lot you have a nice style engaging and powerful.
nice job...remember that darkness exists so we may embrace the light.