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"First sentence I'd take out (water through) thus making it: Your glancing through my…"

Robert L. Allen replied Oct 5, 2011 to Footsteps

2 Oct 8, 2011
Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka

"The tense was bumpy. And the flow was not smooth. I don't think the first line fits.…"

Robert L. Allen replied Oct 5, 2011 to The Gate - Tell me what you think (Good or bad)!!

2 Nov 9, 2011
Reply by Cleveland W. Gibson

"Nice poem, I would take out the punctuation."

Robert L. Allen replied Oct 3, 2011 to Memorise

2 Oct 4, 2011
Reply by Michael C Bliss

"I don't think the last line belongs. But the piece is powerful. (I can not die, For…"

Robert L. Allen replied Oct 1, 2011 to Creation the Creator Forgot

2 Oct 1, 2011
Reply by Michael C Bliss

"I guess I needed to be clearer. The publishers will find the artist for the illustra…"

Robert L. Allen replied Sep 30, 2011 to Children's poetry

7 Sep 30, 2011
Reply by Robert L. Allen

"I'd use grave keeper instead of graveyard. And (He was pulling weeds out in the sun)…"

Robert L. Allen replied Sep 27, 2011 to The Keeper

7 Oct 8, 2011
Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka

"I love it. The line, I’d rather be dead, doesn't go with it. I'd try something else.…"

Robert L. Allen replied Sep 21, 2011 to devil in your eyes

7 Oct 1, 2011
Reply by Pink Asassin

"I have a piece that I wrote for children and when looking for a publisher, I read th…"

Robert L. Allen replied Sep 18, 2011 to Children's poetry

7 Sep 30, 2011
Reply by Robert L. Allen

"I'm not possitive, but I believe Peter Rabbit, Huckleberry Finn, and some of the oth…"

Robert L. Allen replied Sep 3, 2011 to Children's poetry

7 Sep 30, 2011
Reply by Robert L. Allen

"I'd start at the book store and find out if there is a market for children's poetry.…"

Robert L. Allen replied Sep 2, 2011 to Children's poetry

7 Sep 30, 2011
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