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"The word (You) throws me out of the poem. It sounds preachy. I would try another wor…" Robert L. Allen replied Jan 3, 2012 to Perfect	5	Jan 23, 2012 Reply by Kellie Mc Carthy
"First stanza is very powerful. Second stanza too many (faces) are used. The word (Fa…" Robert L. Allen replied Jan 3, 2012 to L'ètranger (The Foreigner)	4	Jan 23, 2012 Reply by Kellie Mc Carthy
"I'd like to see the sentences stronger thus giving life to them. It is a powerful pi…" Robert L. Allen replied Dec 20, 2011 to war in worlds	4	Dec 20, 2011 Reply by Robert L. Allen
"Savvy Bange, As I said before, I paid for my first poem to be published just the way…" Robert L. Allen replied Dec 1, 2011 to World Poetry Movement	5	Dec 1, 2011 Reply by Robert L. Allen
"Good going. Just be careful. If they start asking for money, watch out. But it sound…" Robert L. Allen replied Nov 30, 2011 to World Poetry Movement	5	Dec 1, 2011 Reply by Robert L. Allen
"Sorry, I thought you were looking for feedback. Won't happen again... " Robert L. Allen replied Nov 16, 2011 to Find Your True Self!	8	Nov 16, 2011 Reply by Abby Mains
"Typo " Robert L. Allen replied Nov 14, 2011 to Find Your True Self!	8	Nov 16, 2011 Reply by Abby Mains
"Powerful poem! The only line I didn't like is: to go work out in the gym..." Robert L. Allen replied Nov 12, 2011 to 'SO WHAT'	4	Dec 13, 2011 Reply by FELISHA FRANCIS
"Charming! I believe if you are going to use rhyme poetry, you should ude it througho…" Robert L. Allen replied Nov 12, 2011 to Find Your True Self!	8	Nov 16, 2011 Reply by Abby Mains
"I don't think we have any of the folks left to follow through with your ending. I'm…" Robert L. Allen replied Oct 13, 2011 to Tell Me What You Think!!!	3	Nov 8, 2011 Reply by Cleveland W. Gibson