Where is this Bus? - Authors.com2024-03-28T20:43:52Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/where-is-this-bus?groupUrl=poetry&feed=yes&xn_auth=no@robert, Thanks again, yes th…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-09:3798404:Comment:1185002012-01-09T21:13:08.361ZJonathon Koernerhttp://www.authors.com/profile/JonathonKoerner
<p>@robert, Thanks again, yes this was very hard to write, and still remember that day vividly. Strange how it seemed so slow,with everything else faded out except us. Thanks for the advice, think I will change it. Hopefully I will be publishing my first book soon, so everybody look out,need as much support as possible. Thanks!</p>
<p>@robert, Thanks again, yes this was very hard to write, and still remember that day vividly. Strange how it seemed so slow,with everything else faded out except us. Thanks for the advice, think I will change it. Hopefully I will be publishing my first book soon, so everybody look out,need as much support as possible. Thanks!</p> I can hear the pain. I know t…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-09:3798404:Comment:1184952012-01-09T19:52:19.120ZRobert L. Allenhttp://www.authors.com/profile/RobertAllen
<p>I can hear the pain. I know this was hard to write, even if it came easy. Third line perhaps put in (after) all we been through. And the seventh sentence down, I would take out (me). Again, very heartfelt piece...</p>
<p>I can hear the pain. I know this was hard to write, even if it came easy. Third line perhaps put in (after) all we been through. And the seventh sentence down, I would take out (me). Again, very heartfelt piece...</p> This is a very emotional writ…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-07:3798404:Comment:1181902012-01-07T11:59:37.648ZTabitha R. Pikehttp://www.authors.com/profile/TabithaRPike
<p>This is a very emotional write. I can feel that pain that one feels when someone you love walks away. It is a good write. Thanks for sharing this with us.</p>
<p>This is a very emotional write. I can feel that pain that one feels when someone you love walks away. It is a good write. Thanks for sharing this with us.</p> Thx, yeah im experimenting wi…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-06:3798404:Comment:1181012012-01-06T22:31:10.764ZJonathon Koernerhttp://www.authors.com/profile/JonathonKoerner
<p>Thx, yeah im experimenting with a couple different styles. Thx for your input, will have more because I write a lot, only post a few per day though.</p>
<p>Thx, yeah im experimenting with a couple different styles. Thx for your input, will have more because I write a lot, only post a few per day though.</p> Nicepoem. A little different…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-06:3798404:Comment:1178702012-01-06T16:58:45.709ZBirgitta Abimbola Heikkahttp://www.authors.com/profile/BirgittaAbimbolaHeikka
<p>Nicepoem. A little different but I enoyed reading it.</p>
<p>Nicepoem. A little different but I enoyed reading it.</p>