TIME SLOWLY, SILENTLY, STEADFASTLY, SLIPS AWAY - Authors.com2024-03-28T12:18:29Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/time-slowly-silently-steadfastly-slips-away?groupUrl=poetry&feed=yes&xn_auth=noThanks for your input Birgitt…tag:www.authors.com,2013-01-18:3798404:Comment:1625702013-01-18T15:50:01.640ZRF Husnikhttp://www.authors.com/profile/RFHusnik
<p><br/>Thanks for your input Birgitta. Sorry I didn't respond sooner. I agree "them" is unnecessary. "Into" I think probably does belong however. Thanks again, RFH</p>
<p><br/>Thanks for your input Birgitta. Sorry I didn't respond sooner. I agree "them" is unnecessary. "Into" I think probably does belong however. Thanks again, RFH</p> I like this poem like the oth…tag:www.authors.com,2013-01-10:3798404:Comment:1620342013-01-10T16:55:01.901ZBirgitta Abimbola Heikkahttp://www.authors.com/profile/BirgittaAbimbolaHeikka
<p>I like this poem like the other you wrote. I like your style of writing. My favorite lines begin with "But time won't stop ...." However, I was wondering if you needed the "them" at the end of console or the "into" beginning the line "into - depending of course." Very nice poem.</p>
<p>I like this poem like the other you wrote. I like your style of writing. My favorite lines begin with "But time won't stop ...." However, I was wondering if you needed the "them" at the end of console or the "into" beginning the line "into - depending of course." Very nice poem.</p>