The spell of tears - Authors.com2024-03-29T10:06:40Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/the-spell-of-tears?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A147040&xg_source=msg_com_gr_forum&feed=yes&xn_auth=nointeresting thought, thank yo…tag:www.authors.com,2012-08-13:3798404:Comment:1512762012-08-13T23:37:42.284ZLydia J Belthttp://www.authors.com/profile/LydiaJeanBelt
<p>interesting thought, thank you :)</p>
<p>interesting thought, thank you :)</p> Powerful piece! I don't belie…tag:www.authors.com,2012-08-13:3798404:Comment:1506072012-08-13T07:07:31.854ZRobert L. Allenhttp://www.authors.com/profile/RobertAllen
<p>Powerful piece! I don't believe we, the reader, needs to know what happened. Each reader who can relate to the poem has different things that will lead to these feelings. I wonder if the spell should be introduced somehow, thus creating another segment before the end or: </p>
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<p><span>I'm finally released, </span></p>
<p><span><span>as tears run down my cheeks.</span> </span></p>
<p>Powerful piece! I don't believe we, the reader, needs to know what happened. Each reader who can relate to the poem has different things that will lead to these feelings. I wonder if the spell should be introduced somehow, thus creating another segment before the end or: </p>
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<p><span>I'm finally released, </span></p>
<p><span><span>as tears run down my cheeks.</span> </span></p> thank you Carlo Tagliano sai…tag:www.authors.com,2012-08-03:3798404:Comment:1475372012-08-03T15:31:04.577ZLydia J Belthttp://www.authors.com/profile/LydiaJeanBelt
<p>thank you<br/> <br/> <cite>Carlo Tagliano said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/the-spell-of-tears?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A147040&xg_source=msg_com_gr_forum#3798404Comment147040"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>thats heavy man...ha ha</p>
<p>nice, strong poem.</p>
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<p>thank you<br/> <br/> <cite>Carlo Tagliano said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/the-spell-of-tears?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A147040&xg_source=msg_com_gr_forum#3798404Comment147040"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>thats heavy man...ha ha</p>
<p>nice, strong poem.</p>
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</blockquote> life at home is usually diffi…tag:www.authors.com,2012-08-03:3798404:Comment:1476612012-08-03T15:29:58.457ZLydia J Belthttp://www.authors.com/profile/LydiaJeanBelt
<p>life at home is usually difficult for me, but for an entire week a lot of things seemed to come down on me at once. stress, depression, emotional pain, a torn heart. all of it built up to that moment and i broke down and let loose.<br></br> <br></br> <cite>Cleveland W. Gibson said:…</cite></p>
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<p>life at home is usually difficult for me, but for an entire week a lot of things seemed to come down on me at once. stress, depression, emotional pain, a torn heart. all of it built up to that moment and i broke down and let loose.<br/> <br/> <cite>Cleveland W. Gibson said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/the-spell-of-tears?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A147040&xg_source=msg_com_gr_forum#3798404Comment147379"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>What happened? Bearing in mind 'Cause and Effect'</p>
<p>we'd love to know what happened.</p>
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</blockquote> What happened? Bearing in min…tag:www.authors.com,2012-08-01:3798404:Comment:1473792012-08-01T21:02:46.512ZCleveland W. Gibsonhttp://www.authors.com/profile/ClevelandWGibson
<p>What happened? Bearing in mind 'Cause and Effect'</p>
<p>we'd love to know what happened.</p>
<p>What happened? Bearing in mind 'Cause and Effect'</p>
<p>we'd love to know what happened.</p> thats heavy man...ha ha
nice,…tag:www.authors.com,2012-07-31:3798404:Comment:1470402012-07-31T16:08:21.716ZCarlo Taglianohttp://www.authors.com/profile/CarloTagliano
<p>thats heavy man...ha ha</p>
<p>nice, strong poem.</p>
<p>thats heavy man...ha ha</p>
<p>nice, strong poem.</p>