'sleeping with wolfs' - Authors.com2024-03-29T01:43:32Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/sleeping-with-wolfs?groupUrl=poetry&feed=yes&xn_auth=nothanks for the advice.... :)tag:www.authors.com,2011-12-13:3798404:Comment:1140432011-12-13T17:38:10.978ZFELISHA FRANCIShttp://www.authors.com/profile/CeciliaFrancis
<p>thanks for the advice.... :)</p>
<p>thanks for the advice.... :)</p> The poem is already published…tag:www.authors.com,2011-12-13:3798404:Comment:1139022011-12-13T15:01:32.565ZCleveland W. Gibsonhttp://www.authors.com/profile/ClevelandWGibson
<p>The poem is already published by being on-line. But I think you might want to publish in paper. That's a little harder to do because often you'll meet an editor who decides what to accept or reject. But it is not impossible. What you have to do is go through your poem and make it more meaningful.</p>
<p>The poem is already published by being on-line. But I think you might want to publish in paper. That's a little harder to do because often you'll meet an editor who decides what to accept or reject. But it is not impossible. What you have to do is go through your poem and make it more meaningful.</p> thank youtag:www.authors.com,2011-12-13:3798404:Comment:1136092011-12-13T00:55:16.987ZFELISHA FRANCIShttp://www.authors.com/profile/CeciliaFrancis
<p>thank you</p>
<p>thank you</p> yes there is a reason for the…tag:www.authors.com,2011-12-13:3798404:Comment:1137992011-12-13T00:54:13.559ZFELISHA FRANCIShttp://www.authors.com/profile/CeciliaFrancis
<p>yes there is a reason for the lines being lengthy.....the final verse in red because the friendship is now broken and blood was spill. lastly i plan to publish it but don't know where to..</p>
<p>yes there is a reason for the lines being lengthy.....the final verse in red because the friendship is now broken and blood was spill. lastly i plan to publish it but don't know where to..</p> I've read your poem and thoug…tag:www.authors.com,2011-12-11:3798404:Comment:1135492011-12-11T22:07:38.011ZCleveland W. Gibsonhttp://www.authors.com/profile/ClevelandWGibson
<p>I've read your poem and though at first read it seems a pleasant enough poem I feel that there are 'things' concealed from the ordinary reader. What might help is knowing the background to the poem? In its present state it is 'easy' . But to move it upwards to a higher level needs slight changes that only you can make. It appears slightly in need or re-structuring because the lines are different lengths in each verse. Is there a reason for that? Why is the final verse in red? Does red have a…</p>
<p>I've read your poem and though at first read it seems a pleasant enough poem I feel that there are 'things' concealed from the ordinary reader. What might help is knowing the background to the poem? In its present state it is 'easy' . But to move it upwards to a higher level needs slight changes that only you can make. It appears slightly in need or re-structuring because the lines are different lengths in each verse. Is there a reason for that? Why is the final verse in red? Does red have a special meaning? Has blood been spilt and why?</p>
<p>I can not but help feeling I'm missing something that you want to share. Perhaps it is in the attachment called unsave.aspx. which I cannot open. Others might be able to open it but does it explain everything. I have no idea. And lastly will you publish this poem? I'm in favopur of people publishing because then they will soon know what writing is all about.</p>
<p>Best wishes</p>
<p>Cleveland W. Gibson</p> This poem was intriguing of w…tag:www.authors.com,2011-12-10:3798404:Comment:1132082011-12-10T22:53:35.342ZHilary Wreidt Thompsonhttp://www.authors.com/profile/HilaryWreidtThompson
<p>This poem was intriguing of which I can relate to its bitter love and betrayel. It is soul cutting.</p>
<p>This poem was intriguing of which I can relate to its bitter love and betrayel. It is soul cutting.</p>