Not Always October - Authors.com2024-03-28T16:57:03Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/not-always-october?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A159445&groupId=3798404%3AGroup%3A323&feed=yes&xn_auth=noThank you for your kind comme…tag:www.authors.com,2012-11-15:3798404:Comment:1594452012-11-15T14:13:03.725ZRF Husnikhttp://www.authors.com/profile/RFHusnik
<p>Thank you for your kind comments. The word "its" is used in line 10 because it refers to the servant being a ward of October. I guess that's poetic license. RFH.<br></br> <br></br> <cite>Birgitta Abimbola Heikka said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/not-always-october?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A159128&xg_source=msg_com_gr_forum#3798404Comment159128"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>Love this poem "Not always October." Love the title…</p>
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<p>Thank you for your kind comments. The word "its" is used in line 10 because it refers to the servant being a ward of October. I guess that's poetic license. RFH.<br/> <br/> <cite>Birgitta Abimbola Heikka said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/not-always-october?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A159128&xg_source=msg_com_gr_forum#3798404Comment159128"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>Love this poem "Not always October." Love the title too. It is kind of unique. One thing though, line 10 you wrote "its servants ear." Should that be "his servants ear"? Beautiful.</p>
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</blockquote> Love this poem "Not always Oc…tag:www.authors.com,2012-11-14:3798404:Comment:1591282012-11-14T23:21:47.121ZBirgitta Abimbola Heikkahttp://www.authors.com/profile/BirgittaAbimbolaHeikka
<p>Love this poem "Not always October." Love the title too. It is kind of unique. One thing though, line 10 you wrote "its servants ear." Should that be "his servants ear"? Beautiful.</p>
<p>Love this poem "Not always October." Love the title too. It is kind of unique. One thing though, line 10 you wrote "its servants ear." Should that be "his servants ear"? Beautiful.</p>