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anyone who would care to look at my website is welcome there is also a small preview of my book Mages & Soldiers there. please keep in mind that the site although pretty well intact is not finished but a work in progress.
Sean, please take this as constructive criticism. I would suggest that you break up the wall of text on your Preview page. The hard truth is that people won't read it when it's laid out like that. It's just too hard to follow.
I didn't mention it after I visited last time because you'd said you were working on the site. As it's unchanged, I thought I would. I didn't read it much of it and that's the reason why. My tired eyes can't focus on text when it's so crammed.
You could be losing readers for that reason and it's such a simple thing to fix. Paragraphs of six lines maximum is about right for web readers. What I read I liked. :)
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Congratulations on the book Sean! I see you didn't state a release date on your site for Mages and Soldiers. When's it coming out?
And what's that music you have there? I like it very much.