LuguBrious (Please Care to read?) - Authors.com2024-03-28T20:10:29Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/lugubrious-please-care-to-read?feed=yes&xn_auth=noHi Betty, long time no see. Y…tag:www.authors.com,2012-09-25:3798404:Comment:1556472012-09-25T17:34:50.108ZKay Elizabethhttp://www.authors.com/profile/Kay
<p>Hi Betty, long time no see. You of all people should remember that Poetry should be posted in the Poetry section of the Groups, not on the Forum. ;) You'll get much more feedback that way as each Group member is notified of your post.</p>
<p>Repost it there please and let me know when you have via pm so I can take this one down. I'm closing this for comments so new ones will be added in the right place on your new post in the right section.</p>
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<p>Very nice to see you kiddo. Don't…</p>
<p>Hi Betty, long time no see. You of all people should remember that Poetry should be posted in the Poetry section of the Groups, not on the Forum. ;) You'll get much more feedback that way as each Group member is notified of your post.</p>
<p>Repost it there please and let me know when you have via pm so I can take this one down. I'm closing this for comments so new ones will be added in the right place on your new post in the right section.</p>
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<p>Very nice to see you kiddo. Don't stay away so long next time. :)</p> this is beautiful.......i lov…tag:www.authors.com,2012-09-05:3798404:Comment:1533082012-09-05T19:36:32.640ZDanny(jaxie)http://www.authors.com/profile/jaxie
<p>this is beautiful.......i love it</p>
<p>this is beautiful.......i love it</p> Thank you! :) i am assembalin…tag:www.authors.com,2012-08-28:3798404:Comment:1528882012-08-28T18:57:48.748ZBetzy Crypthttp://www.authors.com/profile/BetzyCrypt
<p>Thank you! :) i am assembaling a book idea as we speak lol thank you for your comment<br></br> <br></br> <cite>Warren Brown said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/lugubrious-please-care-to-read?xg_source=activity#3798404Comment140586"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>Great couplets, with good rhyme and powerful imagery. It reads like an Epitaph...for the victim of the story...possibly another idea for your story. All the best and I hope this is useful for…</p>
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<p>Thank you! :) i am assembaling a book idea as we speak lol thank you for your comment<br/> <br/> <cite>Warren Brown said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/lugubrious-please-care-to-read?xg_source=activity#3798404Comment140586"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>Great couplets, with good rhyme and powerful imagery. It reads like an Epitaph...for the victim of the story...possibly another idea for your story. All the best and I hope this is useful for you:)</p>
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</blockquote> Great couplets, with good rhy…tag:www.authors.com,2012-07-07:3798404:Comment:1405862012-07-07T23:13:34.546ZWarren Brownhttp://www.authors.com/profile/WarrenBrown
<p>Great couplets, with good rhyme and powerful imagery. It reads like an Epitaph...for the victim of the story...possibly another idea for your story. All the best and I hope this is useful for you:)</p>
<p>Great couplets, with good rhyme and powerful imagery. It reads like an Epitaph...for the victim of the story...possibly another idea for your story. All the best and I hope this is useful for you:)</p>