'Beneath The Mask' - Authors.com2024-03-28T18:21:38Zhttp://www.authors.com/forum/topics/beneath-the-mask?groupUrl=poetry&commentId=3798404%3AComment%3A121223&xg_raw_resources=1&groupId=3798404%3AGroup%3A323&feed=yes&xn_auth=noI've been told that many time…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-31:3798404:Comment:1212292012-01-31T17:22:26.768ZBirgitta Abimbola Heikkahttp://www.authors.com/profile/BirgittaAbimbolaHeikka
<p>I've been told that many times.<br/><br/><cite>FELISHA FRANCIS said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/beneath-the-mask?groupUrl=poetry&#3798404Comment121223"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>well thank you, good observation </p>
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<p>I've been told that many times.<br/><br/><cite>FELISHA FRANCIS said:</cite></p>
<blockquote cite="http://www.authors.com/forum/topics/beneath-the-mask?groupUrl=poetry&#3798404Comment121223"><div><div class="xg_user_generated"><p>well thank you, good observation </p>
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</blockquote> well thank you, good observat…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-31:3798404:Comment:1212232012-01-31T04:20:58.303ZFELISHA FRANCIShttp://www.authors.com/profile/CeciliaFrancis
<p>well thank you, good observation </p>
<p>well thank you, good observation </p> Hi Fel,
I loved your poem "Be…tag:www.authors.com,2012-01-30:3798404:Comment:1211792012-01-30T19:38:07.803ZBirgitta Abimbola Heikkahttp://www.authors.com/profile/BirgittaAbimbolaHeikka
<p>Hi Fel,</p>
<p>I loved your poem "Beneath The Mask." It's a beautiful poem. However (and you don't need to do this), I'd change the "wander" in the first stanza to "wonder"and add "that" after "Behold the mask" in the 3rd stanza. Very good poem.</p>
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<p>Hi Fel,</p>
<p>I loved your poem "Beneath The Mask." It's a beautiful poem. However (and you don't need to do this), I'd change the "wander" in the first stanza to "wonder"and add "that" after "Behold the mask" in the 3rd stanza. Very good poem.</p>
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